3 Responses to “All You Need Is Bruv part 4”

  1. Jake says:

    Lol love the idea of the Trotter’s playing football. haha not bad this. Could have been shorter?

  2. Tom says:

    Thanks for the feedback.

    Depends what your idea of ‘jokes’ are. Too many one liners and forced jokes aren’t funny. It’s all about the situation in-hand – and that was my focus. It also depends how you imagine things as you’re reading it.

  3. Kiel says:

    To be honest, my main criticism is, where are the jokes? You have a knack for storytelling though.

    I enjoyed the story, but the comedy just wasn’t there for me. Sorry.

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