7 Responses to “Only Fools Fan Script – Flood”

  1. Griff says:

    The only element of the script I liked was the idea of all the main characters being locked up in the Nags Head.

    There were no funny lines, no sub-plots and not really an actual outcome.

    I was expecting Albert to come and rescue everyone in a little dingy boat which would have been hilarious.

    Add some more meat in that script, add some more purpose and you’ve got yourself a better script. Nice try mate.

    • Griff says:

      Please don’t take my critism personally (I obviously don’t know you) I’ve produced a couple of Fools scripts on here years ago, and I don’t even want to read them anylonger. Shockingly awful, at the time – I thought they were pretty good! I was about 16 or 17 mind. Now I’m 25, I’m still trying to pen a script of my own, but just won’t happen.

      I just think if you added more writing, couple of one liners etc, you’d have the makings of a funny script. The tone was right etc.

      • Brandon says:

        Thanks, I don’t take any criticism personally. I take it in and consider it for the future.

        I’m going to continue to write scripts and improve on them.

  2. Wayne Barrett says:

    Nice try, but were there any jokes in there? It would last about three minutes! I’m not knocking, but come on!

    • Brandon says:

      Yes there was jokes in there. But I guess it’s what you find funny. Thanks for the comment though, much appreciated. Can you give me any advice for a next script?

  3. Adrian says:

    Nice effort but each part sounds like previous episodes. An all nighter at the Nags Head would be an ideal script though. Good work

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