10 Responses to “Catch Me If You Can”

  1. Wayne Barrett says:

    Good effort, I knoe how hard it is to write jokes- It shows what a genius John Sullivan was- but the storyline is ridiculous,there is no way Rodney would resort to something as nasty as that to Del- he would be more likely to go off for some “Healthy competion”! Keep trying!

  2. Bill says:

    I think John Sullivan would of been proud of this following joke:

    Del passes Rodney the hats and Rodney starts laughing.

    ALBERT: What’s wrong with him?
    DEL: He just looked at his face in the mirror.

  3. Bill says:

    I really enjoyed this script. Entertaining. It was very OFAH style and the choice of words you gave all the characters were spot on. I did think Albert jumping on Rodney was a bit out of character but saying that, it could be him when you think of the episode ‘Hole In one’. A big improvement from the last one. 8.5 out of 10 also.

  4. Brandon says:

    By the way, before anyone says it’s supposed to short. :) I tried to include some advice I received, still need to work on the ending I feel though, any of you got any better endings for this script, let me know. :)

    • dan says:

      I enjoyed this much more that the previous one (Airport + Hotel Room)

      I was laughing to myself a few times, during the first half of the script, the whole hat scene was very good, and the interchange with Trigger about the shoes made me chuckle.

      RODNEY: Alright Trig?
      TRIGGER: Yeah, where is Del?
      RODNEY: At home.
      TRIGGER: I might as well ask you then, do you want to buy these shoes?
      RODNEY: How much Trig.
      TRIGGER: I don’t know.
      RODNEY: What do you mean you don’t know.

      That was a Classic Trigger moment, and i could imagine that exchange of words actually happening (I have a vivid imagination)

      The only negative thing i will say about this script, is the scene where Albert jumps on Rodney, was maybe a but to silly, but I think this is a superb effort.

      I gave your last one 7/10, this is definitely an 8.5/10 or maybe even a 9/10 if the Ending was improved.

      I must have a go at writing one of these myself one day, seems like great fun :)

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