9 Responses to “Natural born wally”

  1. Bart says:

    “finest genuine faux leather” – that’s so something Del would say, great humor right there. Faux meaning false in french, and we all know how Del handles french :) I think Sullivan would’ve been proud of this joke.

  2. Bill says:

    I liked this script a lot. Very funny dialogue. I’m a fan of slightly longer scripts but quality is more important than quantity.

  3. Robert says:

    Thank you all for such kind words, it really means a lot! I hope to make more scripts when I get the time. Joe, it’s a great idea, however I really can’t do anything now because I’m very busy, but we can do it one day, why not!

  4. Joe says:

    I forgot to say, it’s a really great script, the trigger jokes are perfect!

  5. Joe says:

    I’ve got a good storyline, but I’m not so good at jokes, we could team up, if you’re interested?

  6. Wayne Barrett says:

    Excellent! The best script yet. I loved Del’s line about “Fish and chips for Christmas” and Triggs “Nothing- I walked here”! Please do some more.

  7. richard says:

    Great potential in your script, just need a good story line with classic only fools style twist now to go with your quality dialogue.

  8. Joanne says:

    Good job Robert, one of the better scripts lately. Short but sweet, and totally in style. U get on your bike and make another one! :)

    • dan says:

      This was really good, you kept it short which is good (because i need to go bed) and it was funny, which is the most important thing – I love reading these scripts.

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