8 Responses to “Script: Seconds Out”

  1. Vin Hatcher says:

    This is really funny. Made me laugh. You can imagine it all happening as you read it. Albert as a boxer is a novel idea. Thanks.

  2. Richard says:

    Great script that. Enjoyed it very much.

  3. Ashton says:

    Up to your great standards as usual Kiel another favourite of mine. Believable dialogue, scenes, sharp one liners and I like the bit at the end about the dog food everything worked and I love how you spiced things up with Albert that was great. Would make a great episode

  4. Griff says:

    Bravo, Kiel.

    I think this one is your sharpest yet and I love the plot. Superb. Well done.

    Makes me think of some of the shit I’ve written :-(

    • Kiel says:

      Thanks for taking the time to read it, and I’m glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully find the time to write another one soon.

      • Griff says:

        Kiel – do you write any of your own stuff?

        I too have written some OFAH episodes. I love it. It’s a great way to warm-up for writing your own stuff.

        • Kiel says:

          I do write my own stuff. You’re right, it is a good way to warm up. It is also a nice break when you are stuck and/or frustrated with a script.

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